Directions:

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay,you should

　　1)describe the drawing briefly.

　　2)explain its intended meaning,and.

　　3)give you comments.

　　預(yù)測范文：

　　If given the choice, a great many people would change at least one aspect of their appearance. As is depicted in the drawing, a young lady is requesting a doctor to give her a straighter nose, bigger lips, smaller chin, slimmer figure, and so on. One option that has gained tremendous popularity in recent decades is plastic surgery, the branch of surgery dealing with therapeutic or cosmetic reformation of body issue.

　　Firstly, one’s appearance is the God’s blessing, and has been one part of our body. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are found mammary gland disease. The more serious effect is that they risk being unable to breast feed. Secondly, the advocating for such a practice will mislead people in the judgment of beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, and so on, which should be the real mainstream of our spiritual life. The practice and some contests about man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty.

　　Concerning the above possible harms the practice may bring about, we are strongly against it and advocate seeking true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should lay more attention on the cultivation of their inner hearts. The inner beauty outweighs the outside beauty in the long run.

　　參考譯文：

　　如果可以選擇的話，很多人至少要改變他們相貌的一個方面。如圖所示，一位女士正在請求一位醫(yī)生給她更筆挺的鼻子、大點兒的嘴唇、小點兒的下巴、更苗條的身段等等。最近幾十年來，一個極其受歡迎的選擇就是整容手術(shù)——治療或美容性的修正人體組織的外科手術(shù)的一個分支。

　　首先，人的外表是上天的賜予，而且是我們身體的一個部分。在豐胸手術(shù)之后，很多女性看起來比以前更加性感。然而，她們中的很多人發(fā)現(xiàn)有乳腺疾病。更嚴重的后果就是他們冒著無法哺乳的風(fēng)險。其次，提倡這種行為將誤導(dǎo)人們對美的判斷。美的觀念內(nèi)容非常豐富。它應(yīng)該包括例如誠實、勤奮等很多美德，這才應(yīng)該是我們精神生活中真正的主流。這種行為以及關(guān)于整容的比賽將誤導(dǎo)人們擁有正確的美的觀念。

　　考慮到這種行為可能帶來的上述危害，我們強烈反對整容，并提倡追求真實自然的美。其次，人們尤其是女性應(yīng)該更加重視培養(yǎng)內(nèi)在的心靈。長遠看來，內(nèi)在美超出外在美。

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